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Thursday, April 22, 2010

NaPoWriMo #22

A revision:

Scars

My brother likes to tell
The story of the scar
That runs half the length of his thigh.
Everyone asks if he was in a car accident
But he smirks and says,

"My sister did this"

He knows I feel guilty again
And again.
I was young, I say
I didn't know any better.
I don't remember the incident
well, but I do know

It was my fault.

I remember the toy box,
The broken lid,
The nail.
I remember the screams.
I remember blood.

4 comments:

Robin said...

Ouch!!! Well done...a testament to the childhood memories, good and bad, tender and not so tender.

Dan said...

I bet he just loves telling that story! Nice work.

Unknown said...

And you seem such a nice person! You make this experience very real for the reader.

Jamie said...

It probably served him right!! (I say that not knowing your brother and out of loyalty to you).;

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