The prompt was to take the first five songs from your iPod shuffle and use them to compose a poem. We were not to change the wording or rearrange the titles; they had to be intact, although we were allowed to add punctuation. Here's the result. I am not thrilled yet, but I see some potential. Can you find all five song titles??? Would love to say there is a prize in it for you, but there isn't -- beyond my respect. ;)
Would love your comments!
Shuffling
I know you were waiting
for me to take
a first step
A step towards something
blue and green
maybe gold
I do
crave the colours,
the experience
But still you wait to take me
to the river of sapphire
bottle green
But you will wait
a thousand years, a thousand
thousand years
For that step,
while I watch
patio lanterns
Picture courtesy of www.monniblog.com
3 comments:
Liked it a lot! The ending was such a surprise, and very refreshing.
Ooooh... I LOVE the facelift of your blog! LOVE LOVE LOVE your background.
Fun poem idea! Very beautiful imagery.
Robin, thanks! And thanks for visiting!
Jenn, thanks too! I am pleased with the "face lift" too.
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