She pleads, stay
Rising to his hand
Teasing, he runs his image
Over her inky skin
scattered blue on an obsidian canvas
cratered blue rounding
still alluring, perfection is misshapen in reflection
But she isn't capable of stillness
It's not in her nature –
Her surface may belie tranquillity, her depths
When plumbed are perpetual motion
Yet it is he that moves her
infinite longing
A favourite photograph
Pictures my father
Grey overalls and tattered cap atop salt and peppered hair
Standing, back to the camera
Unaware
While he surveys his crop
With the broad prairie sky beyond.
A solitary man against a field of black
And an endless sky of blue
Pondering the tiny shoots
Yet unseen
Upon which rest his future
His family’s future.
All his hopes
Depend on the still, quiet seeds
Painstakingly planted.
And just as he was not aware
Of the lens and unseen observer
Capturing this moment,
I wonder if he knows how
His faith in those roots, now grown
And blossoming have shown me
Promises of another harvest.
©2009 Lori Wiens-MacDonald
8 comments:
Love both your poems, Lori. Great work!
Yeah, nicely done, I love the internal rhymes in Infinite Longing and that line about the cap atop salt and peppered hair in Unseen Harvest. Phew!
Thanks Robin and Andy! You are very kind. Any suggestions about a better title for the first would be very much appreciated.
Lori, I stink at titles, but I actually like the title you have. I'd let it be.
Lori,
This is nocely done! Good work!
Pamela
This is great, I especially love: 'perfection is misshapen in / reflection.' I think the title works, the moon and the ocean, after all, never actually get to touch.
Thanks Pamela and Eryl. Your comments are very much appreciated!! I love reading what lines people enjoy -- helps me focus on the good stuff that is working. :)
I enjoyed reading both these picture portraits but especially the first. And I love the line that Eryl picked out too.
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